Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Writing Challenge: Root Words (Jack Lesko)

Word Root : Sub

Words Used : Submerge, Subscription, Submarines, Subscribe. 

Example : Subscribe to my Submarines, Boats, and Fishing magazine! With this amazing Subscription you'll have full access to all of Submarines Boats, and Fishing premium features. For only three small payments of five dollars you'll have a subscription for a lifetime! Submerge yourself today and enjoy Submarines, Boats, and Fishing magazine. 

Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Story Teaser

In the past day we've been growing our story with various story. Dialogue, Description and Action. Here is my part of my story I would like to share. 

"I could see a shadow in my bedroom. It was moving, my cat Cleo was in the other room.  I was the only one in the house, who was it? The door was slightly cracked and the sun peaking through. I could hear a loud bang. I was frightened. "

I took the time to grow and use the foreshadowing technique to make the reader think "What's going to happen next" If I could add more suspense I would! If you don't know my story is a thief mystery.